From ff9fcf21000d1011b3538371edd1657d52d4c88b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: str4d <str4d@mail.i2p>
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2013 23:52:30 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Tweaks to left column text on front page from discussion in
 meeting 214

---
 i2p2www/pages/site/index.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/i2p2www/pages/site/index.html b/i2p2www/pages/site/index.html
index e658cf15..575d6ee8 100644
--- a/i2p2www/pages/site/index.html
+++ b/i2p2www/pages/site/index.html
@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@
     <h1>{% trans %}What is I2P?{% endtrans %}</h1>
     <ul>
       <li>{% trans -%}
-I2P is a full darknet implementation - a network within a network, unmonitorable by your ISP or government.
+I2P is a full darknet implementation - a network within a network, and is intended to protect against monitoring by third parties, such as hostile governments or ISPs.
 {% endtrans %}</li>
       <li>{% trans -%}
-I2P is used by many people who care about their privacy, as well as those in high-risk situations such as activists, oppressed people, journalists and whistleblowers.
+I2P is used by many people who care about their privacy, as well as those in high-risk situations. It is designed to protect activists, oppressed people, journalists and whistleblowers - as well as the average person.
 {% endtrans %}</li>
       <li>{% trans -%}
 I2P runs on Java and is therefore available anywhere Java will run, including desktops, embedded systems (like the Raspberry Pi)  and Android phones.