From b97ec8da90d6d6e9a90d7dddc603e2dd79b141a7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hankhill19580 Date: Mon, 27 Jul 2020 17:01:48 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] clean up some of the awkward language on the welcome wizard, don't ask people to 'be patient' explain what is happening, etc --- apps/routerconsole/jsp/welcome.jsp | 66 ++++++++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 40 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-) diff --git a/apps/routerconsole/jsp/welcome.jsp b/apps/routerconsole/jsp/welcome.jsp index 446421dd8d..402076788f 100644 --- a/apps/routerconsole/jsp/welcome.jsp +++ b/apps/routerconsole/jsp/welcome.jsp @@ -123,13 +123,15 @@

-<%=intl._t("Please select your preferred language")%> + +<%=intl._t("This project is supported by Transifex and OTF through the Localization Lab.")%> +<%=intl._t("This helps keep I2P accessible to everyone all over the world.")%> +<%=intl._t("Thank you to all of the volunteers all over the world who help make I2P accessible.")%> +<%=intl._t("If you would like to get involved,")%> +<%=intl._t("please consider the I2P translation efforts.")%>

-<%=intl._t("This project is supported by Transifex and OTF through the Localization Lab.")%> -<%=intl._t("Thank you to all of the volunteers all over the world who help keep our project")%> -<%=intl._t("accessible. I2P is always looking for support to keep its documentation up to date,")%> -<%=intl._t("please consider supporting our translation efforts.")%> +<%=intl._t("Please select your preferred language")%>

@@ -151,13 +153,19 @@

-<%=intl._t("I2P will now test your internet connection to identify the optimal speed settings.")%> -<%=intl._t("Bandwidth participation improves the anonymity level of all users on the network and maximizes your download speed.")%> -<%=intl._t("This is done using the third-party M-Lab service.")%> -<%=intl._t("During this time you will be connected directly to M-Lab's service, with your real IP address.")%> +<%=intl._t("Let's check your internet connection!")%> +

+

+<%=intl._t("Bandwidth participation not only makes your speed and connection to the I2P network better, but also helps everyone using the network.")%> +<%=intl._t("When everyone is sharing as much bandwidth as possible, everyone gets to have better performance and privacy by sharing participating traffic.")%> +

+

+<%=intl._t("I2P uses M-Lab to help you test your internet connection and find the optimal speed settings.")%> +<%=intl._t("M-Lab is a third-party service.")%> +<%=intl._t("During this time you will be connected directly to M-Lab's service with your real IP address.")%>

<%=intl._t("Please review the M-Lab privacy policies linked below.")%> -<%=intl._t("If you do not wish to run the M-Lab bandwidth test, you may skip it by clicking the button below.")%> +<%=intl._t("If you do not wish to run the M-Lab bandwidth test, you can skip it and configure your bandwidth later.")%>

<%=intl._t("M-Lab Privacy Policy")%>
<%=intl._t("M-Lab Name Server Privacy Policy")%> @@ -188,13 +196,13 @@

<%=intl._t("While the I2P router software is getting ready to go, it's testing your bandwidth, obtaining an initial")%> -<%=intl._t("set of peers from a reseed server, making it's first few exploratory peer connections, and getting.")%> +<%=intl._t("set of peers from a reseed server, making it's first few connections, and getting")%> <%=intl._t("integrated with the rest of the network.")%>

-<%=intl._t("To learn more about these topics and what functions they perform for I2P, you can visit our")%> -<%=intl._t("web site")%><%=intl._t(", our")%> -<%=intl._t("wiki")%><%=intl._t(", or contact us on our")%> +<%=intl._t("To learn more about how important I2P Reseed servers are, or explore other topics and what functions they perform for I2P, you can visit the")%> +<%=intl._t("I2P web site")%><%=intl._t(", our")%> +<%=intl._t("I2P Wiki")%><%=intl._t(", or contact us on our")%> <%=intl._t("forums")%> <%=intl._t("to get help from the community.")%>

@@ -277,7 +285,7 @@ out.print(intl._t("I2P requires at least 12KBps to enable sharing. ")); out.print(intl._t("By donating your bandwidth to participating traffic, you not only help others, you improve ")); - out.print(intl._t("your own anonymity by creating cover traffic.")); + out.print(intl._t("your own anonymity and performance.")); out.print("
"); out.print(intl._t("We recommend sharing 75% or more for I2P, but you can adjust based on your needs.")); } else { @@ -285,7 +293,7 @@ out.print("
"); out.print(intl._t("By donating your bandwidth to participating traffic, you not only help others, you improve ")); - out.print(intl._t("your own anonymity by creating cover traffic.")); + out.print(intl._t("your own anonymity and performance.")); out.print("
"); out.print(intl._t("We recommend sharing 75% or more for I2P, but you can adjust based on your needs.")); } @@ -328,17 +336,19 @@ <%=intl._t("bittorrent")%> <%=intl._t("and")%> <%=intl._t("e-mail")%> -<%=intl._t("so you can keep doing the things you need to do.")%> +<%=intl._t("and a.")%> +<%=intl._t("web server")%> +<%=intl._t("so you can create, communicate, and share your content.")%> <%=intl._t("These applications work with I2P automatically and require no additional configuration.")%>

<%=intl._t("Normally, I2P addresses are long and random. To help make I2P addresses easier to read and remember,")%> <%=intl._t("the I2P router also includes it's own built-in")%> <%=intl._t("Address Book")%> -<%=intl._t("so you can")%> -<%=intl._t("privately assign human-readable names to the sites you like to visit.")%> -<%=intl._t("The Address Book can also be used to subscribe to lists of URL's shared by other I2P users who choose")%> -<%=intl._t("to distribute their own lists of hostnames and addresses.")%> +<%=intl._t("which is where you keep track of all your I2P \"Contacts\" by")%> +<%=intl._t("giving them human-readable names. This can be used for the sites you like to visit, messaging contacts, or potentially any other service on I2P.")%> +<%=intl._t("To help you get started, the address book can be used to subscribe to lists of")%> +<%=intl._t("addresses distributed by other I2P users.")%>

<% @@ -347,7 +357,7 @@ // Done %> -

<%=intl._t("Welcome to I2P!")%>

+

<%=intl._t("Welcome to the Invisible Internet!")%>

◯ @@ -359,11 +369,15 @@

-<%=intl._t("When you start I2P for the first time, it needs need to integrate with the I2P network. It may also")%> -<%=intl._t("indicate that it is temporarily \"Rejecting Tunnels.\" This is a normal part of the process. Please be patient.")%> +<%=intl._t("It will take some time for your peers to integrate your router into the network,")%> +<%=intl._t("but while that is happening you can still explore I2P applications and get to know your way around the router console.")%> +<%=intl._t("There is quick guide, news about the latest release, an FAQ, and troubleshooting guide available on the /console page.")%>

-<%=intl._t("Green circles in the sidebar area of the I2P Router Console indicate that you are ready to use I2P")%> -<%=intl._t("for browsing or applications.")%> +<%=intl._t("You may notice a message in the sidebar that I2P is rejecting tunnels.")%> +<%=intl._t("This is normal behavior as part of the start-up process, to make sure that")%> +<%=intl._t("your router is ready to help others with participating traffic.")%> +<%=intl._t("When the connection indicators in the sidebar turn green, you are ready to")%> +<%=intl._t("explore the Invisible Internet.")%>

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