clean up some of the awkward language on the welcome wizard, don't ask people to 'be patient' explain what is happening, etc

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hankhill19580
2020-07-27 17:01:48 +00:00
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</div> </div>
<div class="wizardtext"> <div class="wizardtext">
<p> <p>
<%=intl._t("Please select your preferred language")%>
<%=intl._t("This project is supported by Transifex and OTF through the Localization Lab.")%>
<%=intl._t("This helps keep I2P accessible to everyone all over the world.")%>
<%=intl._t("Thank you to all of the volunteers all over the world who help make I2P accessible.")%>
<%=intl._t("If you would like to get involved,")%>
<a href="https://www.transifex.com/projects/p/I2P/" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("please consider the I2P translation efforts.")%></a>
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
<%=intl._t("This project is supported by Transifex and OTF through the Localization Lab.")%> <%=intl._t("Please select your preferred language")%>
<%=intl._t("Thank you to all of the volunteers all over the world who help keep our project")%>
<%=intl._t("accessible. I2P is always looking for support to keep its documentation up to date,")%>
<a href="https://www.transifex.com/projects/p/I2P/" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("please consider supporting our translation efforts.")%></a>
</p> </p>
</div> </div>
</div> </div>
@ -151,13 +153,19 @@
</div> </div>
<div class="wizardtext"> <div class="wizardtext">
<p> <p>
<%=intl._t("I2P will now test your internet connection to identify the optimal speed settings.")%> <%=intl._t("Let's check your internet connection!")%>
<%=intl._t("Bandwidth participation improves the anonymity level of all users on the network and maximizes your download speed.")%> </p>
<%=intl._t("This is done using the third-party M-Lab service.")%> <p>
<%=intl._t("During this time you will be connected directly to M-Lab's service, with your real IP address.")%> <%=intl._t("Bandwidth participation not only makes your speed and connection to the I2P network better, but also helps everyone using the network.")%>
<%=intl._t("When everyone is sharing as much bandwidth as possible, everyone gets to have better performance and privacy by sharing participating traffic.")%>
</p>
<p>
<%=intl._t("I2P uses M-Lab to help you test your internet connection and find the optimal speed settings.")%>
<%=intl._t("M-Lab is a third-party service.")%>
<%=intl._t("During this time you will be connected directly to M-Lab's service with your real IP address.")%>
</p><p> </p><p>
<%=intl._t("Please review the M-Lab privacy policies linked below.")%> <%=intl._t("Please review the M-Lab privacy policies linked below.")%>
<%=intl._t("If you do not wish to run the M-Lab bandwidth test, you may skip it by clicking the button below.")%> <%=intl._t("If you do not wish to run the M-Lab bandwidth test, you can skip it and configure your bandwidth later.")%>
</p><p> </p><p>
<a href="https://www.measurementlab.net/privacy/" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("M-Lab Privacy Policy")%></a> <a href="https://www.measurementlab.net/privacy/" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("M-Lab Privacy Policy")%></a>
<br><a href="https://github.com/m-lab/mlab-ns/blob/master/MLAB-NS_PRIVACY_POLICY.md" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("M-Lab Name Server Privacy Policy")%></a> <br><a href="https://github.com/m-lab/mlab-ns/blob/master/MLAB-NS_PRIVACY_POLICY.md" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("M-Lab Name Server Privacy Policy")%></a>
@ -188,13 +196,13 @@
<div class="wizardtext"> <div class="wizardtext">
<p> <p>
<%=intl._t("While the I2P router software is getting ready to go, it's testing your bandwidth, obtaining an initial")%> <%=intl._t("While the I2P router software is getting ready to go, it's testing your bandwidth, obtaining an initial")%>
<%=intl._t("set of peers from a reseed server, making it's first few exploratory peer connections, and getting.")%> <%=intl._t("set of peers from a reseed server, making it's first few connections, and getting")%>
<%=intl._t("integrated with the rest of the network.")%> <%=intl._t("integrated with the rest of the network.")%>
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
<%=intl._t("To learn more about these topics and what functions they perform for I2P, you can visit our")%> <%=intl._t("To learn more about how important I2P Reseed servers are, or explore other topics and what functions they perform for I2P, you can visit the")%>
<a href="http://geti2p.net" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("web site")%></a><%=intl._t(", our")%> <a href="http://geti2p.net" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("I2P web site")%></a><%=intl._t(", our")%>
<a href="http://wiki.i2p-projekt.i2p" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("wiki")%></a><%=intl._t(", or contact us on our")%> <a href="http://wiki.i2p-projekt.i2p" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("I2P Wiki")%></a><%=intl._t(", or contact us on our")%>
<a href="http://i2pforum.net" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("forums")%></a> <a href="http://i2pforum.net" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("forums")%></a>
<%=intl._t("to get help from the community.")%> <%=intl._t("to get help from the community.")%>
</p> </p>
@ -277,7 +285,7 @@
out.print(intl._t("I2P requires at least 12KBps to enable sharing. ")); out.print(intl._t("I2P requires at least 12KBps to enable sharing. "));
out.print(intl._t("By donating your bandwidth to participating traffic, you not only help others, you improve ")); out.print(intl._t("By donating your bandwidth to participating traffic, you not only help others, you improve "));
out.print(intl._t("your own anonymity by creating cover traffic.")); out.print(intl._t("your own anonymity and performance."));
out.print("</br>"); out.print("</br>");
out.print(intl._t("We recommend sharing 75% or more for I2P, but you can adjust based on your needs.")); out.print(intl._t("We recommend sharing 75% or more for I2P, but you can adjust based on your needs."));
} else { } else {
@ -285,7 +293,7 @@
out.print("</br>"); out.print("</br>");
out.print(intl._t("By donating your bandwidth to participating traffic, you not only help others, you improve ")); out.print(intl._t("By donating your bandwidth to participating traffic, you not only help others, you improve "));
out.print(intl._t("your own anonymity by creating cover traffic.")); out.print(intl._t("your own anonymity and performance."));
out.print("</br>"); out.print("</br>");
out.print(intl._t("We recommend sharing 75% or more for I2P, but you can adjust based on your needs.")); out.print(intl._t("We recommend sharing 75% or more for I2P, but you can adjust based on your needs."));
} }
@ -328,17 +336,19 @@
<a href="/torrents" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("bittorrent")%></a> <a href="/torrents" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("bittorrent")%></a>
<%=intl._t("and")%> <%=intl._t("and")%>
<a href="/webmail" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("e-mail")%></a> <a href="/webmail" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("e-mail")%></a>
<%=intl._t("so you can keep doing the things you need to do.")%> <%=intl._t("and a.")%>
<a href="/i2ptunnel" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("web server")%></a>
<%=intl._t("so you can create, communicate, and share your content.")%>
<%=intl._t("These applications work with I2P automatically and require no additional configuration.")%> <%=intl._t("These applications work with I2P automatically and require no additional configuration.")%>
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
<%=intl._t("Normally, I2P addresses are long and random. To help make I2P addresses easier to read and remember,")%> <%=intl._t("Normally, I2P addresses are long and random. To help make I2P addresses easier to read and remember,")%>
<%=intl._t("the I2P router also includes it's own built-in")%> <%=intl._t("the I2P router also includes it's own built-in")%>
<a href="/dns" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("Address Book")%></a> <a href="/dns" target="_blank"><%=intl._t("Address Book")%></a>
<%=intl._t("so you can")%> <%=intl._t("which is where you keep track of all your I2P \"Contacts\" by")%>
<%=intl._t("privately assign human-readable names to the sites you like to visit.")%> <%=intl._t("giving them human-readable names. This can be used for the sites you like to visit, messaging contacts, or potentially any other service on I2P.")%>
<%=intl._t("The Address Book can also be used to subscribe to lists of URL's shared by other I2P users who choose")%> <%=intl._t("To help you get started, the address book can be used to subscribe to lists of")%>
<%=intl._t("to distribute their own lists of hostnames and addresses.")%> <%=intl._t("addresses distributed by other I2P users.")%>
</p> </p>
</div> </div>
<% <%
@ -347,7 +357,7 @@
// Done // Done
%> %>
<img class="wizard progress" src="/themes/console/images/wizard/wizardlogo.png"> <img class="wizard progress" src="/themes/console/images/wizard/wizardlogo.png">
<h3 id="wizardheading" class="wizard"><%=intl._t("Welcome to I2P!")%></h3> <h3 id="wizardheading" class="wizard"><%=intl._t("Welcome to the Invisible Internet!")%></h3>
<img class="wizardimg" src="/themes/console/images/wizard/step-6.png"> <img class="wizardimg" src="/themes/console/images/wizard/step-6.png">
<div class="clickableProgression"> <div class="clickableProgression">
<span class="visitedProgression">&#x25EF;</span> <span class="visitedProgression">&#x25EF;</span>
@ -359,11 +369,15 @@
</div> </div>
<div class="wizardtext"> <div class="wizardtext">
<p> <p>
<%=intl._t("When you start I2P for the first time, it needs need to integrate with the I2P network. It may also")%> <%=intl._t("It will take some time for your peers to integrate your router into the network,")%>
<%=intl._t("indicate that it is temporarily \"Rejecting Tunnels.\" This is a normal part of the process. Please be patient.")%> <%=intl._t("but while that is happening you can still explore I2P applications and get to know your way around the router console.")%>
<%=intl._t("There is quick guide, news about the latest release, an FAQ, and troubleshooting guide available on the /console page.")%>
</p><p> </p><p>
<%=intl._t("Green circles in the sidebar area of the I2P Router Console indicate that you are ready to use I2P")%> <%=intl._t("You may notice a message in the sidebar that I2P is rejecting tunnels.")%>
<%=intl._t("for browsing or applications.")%> <%=intl._t("This is normal behavior as part of the start-up process, to make sure that")%>
<%=intl._t("your router is ready to help others with participating traffic.")%>
<%=intl._t("When the connection indicators in the sidebar turn green, you are ready to")%>
<%=intl._t("explore the Invisible Internet.")%>
</p> </p>
</div> </div>
<% <%